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Dominic Edrick Shiokage
Posts : 971 Ryo : 64600
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (410/410)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Sun Apr 08, 2012 7:51 am | |
| I'll Help! - Cooldown needs to be atleast 7. It would only really be able to heal major wounds not associated with organ damage to a certain degree.
Look Out! - Cooldown needs to be atleast 7. Up to how many friendly targets get this boost within the range? | |
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Pucko Caelum Genin
Posts : 63 Ryo : 26800
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (160/160)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Sun Apr 08, 2012 7:54 am | |
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Dominic Edrick Shiokage
Posts : 971 Ryo : 64600
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (410/410)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Sun Apr 08, 2012 3:50 pm | |
| Stay Away! - If the one under the genjutsu thinks they are moving, and performs techniques, do they lose this chakra when they snap out of it, or do they regain any lost chakra used while in the illusion? Answer this, dont edit it into the technique yet. | |
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Pucko Caelum Genin
Posts : 63 Ryo : 26800
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (160/160)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Sun Apr 08, 2012 6:26 pm | |
| There's no chakra loss. It's all an illusion designed to grant time for cud to heal and to catch your breath | |
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Dominic Edrick Shiokage
Posts : 971 Ryo : 64600
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (410/410)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Mon Apr 09, 2012 5:46 pm | |
| Ok, then I would now like you to edit that any chakra used while under this genjutsu returns to the enemy after it is broken, unless it is Genjutsu Kai. It's a bit of a drawback to you, but nonetheless... | |
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Pucko Caelum Genin
Posts : 63 Ryo : 26800
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (160/160)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:41 pm | |
| Ok there ive added it in. Bit of a pity but i understand it needs to be there | |
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Haru Satsujin S-Rank
Posts : 276 Ryo : 3500
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (320/320)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Fri Apr 13, 2012 5:56 pm | |
| Alright Pucko, make the edit for the Kai on Stay Away! and we'll move onto Baroo | |
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Pucko Caelum Genin
Posts : 63 Ryo : 26800
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (160/160)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Sat Apr 14, 2012 9:05 am | |
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Haru Satsujin S-Rank
Posts : 276 Ryo : 3500
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (320/320)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Wed Apr 18, 2012 5:33 pm | |
| Back Off! - looks good to me. I would convert meters to feet or yards though.
Rush! - List the damage done, C Rank damage is a broad scale. | |
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Pucko Caelum Genin
Posts : 63 Ryo : 26800
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (160/160)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Thu Apr 19, 2012 3:20 am | |
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Haru Satsujin S-Rank
Posts : 276 Ryo : 3500
Ninja Info Card Chakra: (320/320)
| Subject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete) Thu Apr 19, 2012 5:40 pm | |
| Slam them Baroo! - For starters, the distance is off. What is the maximum length it can go? Two, where do you get the water from? most water release techniques require water from around them and more skilled users can create water Once per topic. Now for the holding the charge thing, I don't know if that will fly or not | |
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