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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeSun Apr 08, 2012 7:51 am

I'll Help! - Cooldown needs to be atleast 7. It would only really be able to heal major wounds not associated with organ damage to a certain degree.

Look Out! - Cooldown needs to be atleast 7. Up to how many friendly targets get this boost within the range?
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Pucko Caelum
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeSun Apr 08, 2012 7:54 am

alright made the changes
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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeSun Apr 08, 2012 3:50 pm

Stay Away! - If the one under the genjutsu thinks they are moving, and performs techniques, do they lose this chakra when they snap out of it, or do they regain any lost chakra used while in the illusion? Answer this, dont edit it into the technique yet.
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Pucko Caelum
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeSun Apr 08, 2012 6:26 pm

There's no chakra loss. It's all an illusion designed to grant time for cud to heal and to catch your breath
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Dominic Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeMon Apr 09, 2012 5:46 pm

Ok, then I would now like you to edit that any chakra used while under this genjutsu returns to the enemy after it is broken, unless it is Genjutsu Kai. It's a bit of a drawback to you, but nonetheless...
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Pucko Caelum
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeMon Apr 09, 2012 7:41 pm

Ok there ive added it in. Bit of a pity but i understand it needs to be there
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Haru Satsujin
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeFri Apr 13, 2012 5:56 pm

Alright Pucko, make the edit for the Kai on Stay Away! and we'll move onto Baroo
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Pucko Caelum
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeSat Apr 14, 2012 9:05 am

donsies
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Haru Satsujin
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 18, 2012 5:33 pm

Back Off! - looks good to me. I would convert meters to feet or yards though.

Rush! - List the damage done, C Rank damage is a broad scale.
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Pucko Caelum
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 19, 2012 3:20 am

donsies
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Haru Satsujin
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PostSubject: Re: Bear Scroll (Complete)   Bear Scroll (Complete) - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 19, 2012 5:40 pm

Slam them Baroo! - For starters, the distance is off. What is the maximum length it can go? Two, where do you get the water from? most water release techniques require water from around them and more skilled users can create water Once per topic. Now for the holding the charge thing, I don't know if that will fly or not
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