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Yoshi
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Yoshi


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PostSubject: Hamatachi, Yoshi   Hamatachi, Yoshi I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 15, 2012 2:56 am



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First Name: Yoshi
Last Name: Hamatachi
Gender: Male
Height: 5 feet
Weight: 40 kg
Age: 9
Birthday: 19 January

Village: Tsundoragakure
Rank: Genin
Elements: Wind, Lightning, Fire
Specializations: Weaponry, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, & Genjutsu


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Personality: Yoshi is the kind of guy that doesn't show much expression. He always puts on his poker face. He doesn't trust much people, only those he is close with. Earning his trust would be very hard.
Yoshi is very loyal. If he were to join the Yugure, He'll stay there forever. If he joins a group to destroy Yugure, he'll stay in that group forever. Yoshi is also a very quiet person. He is also a very serious person when he talks to someone he doesn't know. But, he can be very funny, talkative, and cheerful when he is with his friends.

In Battle

When he is in battle, Yoshi is very serious. He protects his pride over anything. He loves his pride more than his life. He becomes a totally different person when fighting. He changes into a heartless person. Although he becomes heartless in a battle, he still put one thing above his pride; his comrades. To him, his friends are above anything. When he battles, he'll try to act as relax as possible so that his enemies will not be able to read his thought or next move.
Likes: Yoshi likes reading. To him, training includes both physical and mentality. He also likes practicing Ninjutsu. But above all, he likes to train his Weaponry. Yoshi loves the way the blade moves, the wind it creates, the sound of the blade as it slashes; oh, it makes him feel like heaven. Yoshi loves drinking tea. Whenever he drinks tea, it soothes his mind, allowing him to clear his thoughts and focus. Yoshi also likes strong-willed people.
Yoshi also likes hiking, trekking in the jungle and doing activities that helps him get in touch with nature. He is a nature loving guy. Somehow, when nature and him gets in tune, he gets stronger and calmer. Yoshi also loves ramen. Everyday, he would have his dinner at his favorite ramen stall. He would also have some of his favorite steamed buns after his dinner.
Dislikes: Yoshi hates weak-minded people. He thinks those people should just die. He also hates coffee. He hates annoying, irritating people, whether they're a child or an adult. They just disrupts his thoughts. He also hates people who begs for mercy. Yoshi also hates people who destroys nature. He, who is a nature loving guy, would just destroy you if he sees you destroying or defiling nature. Yoshi also hates bullies. He would stand up for the weak.
Motivation: Yoshi's motivation is his father. He had been trained in the ninja way ever since he was 4. His father has taught him a lot of things concerning Ninjutsu and Weaponry. Another motivation he has is to make his parents and family proud. He has been put with a lot of pressure, since he was considered a prodigy, graduating from the academy when he was only 7. Another motivation he has is to be the Shimokage. He would want to be the Shimokage so that he can protect his village. Since he would be strong when he becomes the Shimokage, he could protect his friends and those he cherish. He also thinks that being the Shimokage will make people respect him.
Fears: Yoshi is afraid of losing his friends and those he cherish. He is afraid of the inability to protect them. He fears that he will be lonely, and that is one thing he is afraid. He is also afraid of putting down or bringing shame to his family. That is why he trains super hard just to keep his family and parents proud. Another thing he is afraid of is the destruction of his village. He is afraid that his beloved village would be conquered, or destroyed by evil people.


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History: Pre-Academy Arc -
"Ah, just a little bit more...",said the doctor while holding a lamp"Ah, here we go! It's a baby boy! Seems pretty healthy to me!". A man in his twenties then gently took the baby from the doctor and said, "Mia, look! He's got your eyes and ears! I think he got his nose from me! Isn't he adorable?". The doctor then bid farewell and left. The man then passed the baby to the lady. The lady then stared lovingly at the baby while he stares back at her."So, what should we call you? Honey, let's call him "Yoshi"! , said the lady. The man then took the baby from the lady and said, It's been decided! From this day onwards, you will be called Yoshi Hamatachi!". From that day onward Hamachi Hamatachi(who was a Jounin), Yoshi's father , and his mother, Mia Hamatachi, raised him up into a healthy, intelligent and strong shinobi. His father, who was a Jounin then, taught him lots of things about ninja techniques and things that will help him become a great ninja. As a child, he spends his days by climbing trees, running around, reading books, and playing with his friends. Every evening, he would wait at his house porch for his dad to return from his missions. His dad would bring back a bar of chocolate for him and then they would take a walk around the forest, and they would chat while walking. Yoshi loved his dad above everything in the whole world.

Academy Arc -
When Yoshi reached the age of 6, his parents sent him to the Academy. As an academy student, Yoshi was one of the top students. He easily learnt all the jutsus that were taught. He also did well in the exams, both Practical and theory. Since he knows everything an academy student needs to know, he doesn't pay much attention in school. After school, he would go off to the library to borrow some books to read. Then, he would hang out with his friends. After playing, he would then go out for a walk in the jungle alone or with his dad to relax and to clear his mind.

Genin Arc -
After successfully passing the exam at the age of 7 with flying colors, he became a genin. He was then assigned to Team 8, which was led by Kuro Uchiha along with a boy named Sachi and a girl named Myo. Together, they went on missions. One of the unforgettable mission was a mission he took when he was 8. The mission he had was a "C rank" mission. He and his team was suppose to escort a man with a luggage of only a sword from Shippuu to Tsuki. He and his team thought nothing dangerous would happened. They took the boat and head out of shippuu. When they were in the middle of the ocean, their boat was hijacked. Several shinobis tried to defeat the hijackers, but they failed. So, Team 8 decided to go. As his team headed out to the deck, they saw 5 shinobis, who were maybe A-ranks. He and his team attacked the hijackers without sparing a second. As Yoshi was fighting with 2 other shinobis, he saw one of the hijacker used a fire jutsu on Sachi and Sachi was burnt to death. Immediately, Yoshi ran to Sachi and tried to save him but he was too late. In fury, he unleashed his best jutsu and defeated the shinobis. After the hijackers were dealt with, Yoshi sank to his knees and cried over Sachi's ashes. His sensei, Kuro, comforted him. After that, they reached Shipuu and completed the mission.

RP Sample: "Hehehe! If it ain't Kiki! I ain't gonna let you pass the Chunin exam! Finally, a chance to rip you up in to shreds!" ,said Gary, his rival. Gary then took out 5 kunais on each hand and threw the kunais at Yoshi and his friends. His team quickly dodged the kunais. "Myo! You take that girl! Kakashi! That tall guy! I'll handle Gary!" , shouted Yoshi. His friends then nodded and charged to their assigned enemies.Yoshi then did some hand-seals and shouted, "Lightning Beast Running Technique!". At once, one lightning beast appeared with a leash held by Yoshi. The beast then charged towards Gary. Gary then did some handseals and destroyed the beast. Yoshi, who knew this technique would be defeated easily by his rival, did some handseals immediately and shouted , "Water Release: Great Water Arm!". At once, a large water arm appeared on his right hand. He then attacked Gary with it. Gary, grinning casted a lightning jutsu at it, shocking Yoshi, who then fell on his knees. Gary then did some jutsu that tied Yoshi up. "Idiot. I thought you would be a nicer opponent than all those junks. You disappoint me.", said gary as he pulled out a kunai. "Goodbye..", said Gary as he stabbed the kunai at Yoshi's head. "What a joker you are, Gary...", said Yoshi, "...didn't you learn about this technique called Kage Bunshin..?", said v as he stabbed Gary at his back. Gary, who spat out blood after being stabbed then said,"Shit.... I forgot....that.....".


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Yoshi
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PostSubject: Re: Hamatachi, Yoshi   Hamatachi, Yoshi I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 15, 2012 3:04 am

DONE
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PostSubject: Re: Hamatachi, Yoshi   Hamatachi, Yoshi I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 16, 2012 5:45 am

Please remove the spoilers from your application
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PostSubject: Re: Hamatachi, Yoshi   Hamatachi, Yoshi I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 16, 2012 6:28 am

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Hamatachi, Yoshi   Hamatachi, Yoshi I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 16, 2012 10:08 pm

Increase all the 5 sections under the personality section so that they are all good sized paragraphs each. Other than that this is fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Hamatachi, Yoshi   Hamatachi, Yoshi I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 16, 2012 11:39 pm

You mean 4? Anyways, edited the four sections under personality, which are likes, dislikes, motivation and fear. I don't know what the fifth section is.
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PostSubject: Re: Hamatachi, Yoshi   Hamatachi, Yoshi I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 17, 2012 12:14 pm

Just like history is under history there is a section called personality under personality. Make that one section a little more filled out and you'll be good to go, the others you extended look fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Hamatachi, Yoshi   Hamatachi, Yoshi I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 17, 2012 6:57 pm

Oh, so that's what you mean. Done. BTW, my personality section consist of two paragraph, one telling his normal personality, the other about his personality when fighting.
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PostSubject: Re: Hamatachi, Yoshi   Hamatachi, Yoshi I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 17, 2012 7:04 pm

alright then the application is approved at genin level, have fun RPing now
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PostSubject: Re: Hamatachi, Yoshi   Hamatachi, Yoshi I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 17, 2012 8:07 pm

Okay . Thanks.
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